Wow! I like the way you have described the setting Nela. I especially like that you explained using your senses the echo as you entered the hall. That's a really good hook you've used. It makes me want to read more.I can infer the word echo means that the hall must have been empty. The sound of strumming ukes. Now I feel like I've been transported to a tropical island sitting under a palm tree. Again I can infer because you used the word obsessed to describe feelings. What a great word obsessed.It makes me think the young ones are sleep walking towards the sound of the music coming from the ukes. The young ones must have really enjoyed the Tui whanau assembly. I only wish I could read what happens next... keep up the amazing writing Nela.
Wow! I like the way you have described the setting Nela. I especially like that you explained using your senses the echo as you entered the hall. That's a really good hook you've used. It makes me want to read more.I can infer the word echo means that the hall must have been empty. The sound of strumming ukes. Now I feel like I've been transported to a tropical island sitting under a palm tree. Again I can infer because you used the word obsessed to describe feelings. What a great word obsessed.It makes me think the young ones are sleep walking towards the sound of the music coming from the ukes. The young ones must have really enjoyed the Tui whanau assembly. I only wish I could read what happens next... keep up the amazing writing Nela.
Wow! I like the way you have described the setting Nela. I especially like that you explained using your senses the echo as you entered the hall. That's a really good hook you've used. It makes me want to read more.I can infer the word echo means that the hall must have been empty. The sound of strumming ukes. Now I feel like I've been transported to a tropical island sitting under a palm tree. Again I can infer because you used the word obsessed to describe feelings. What a great word obsessed.It makes me think the young ones are sleep walking towards the sound of the music coming from the ukes. The young ones must have really enjoyed the Tui whanau assembly. I only wish I could read what happens next... keep up the amazing writing Nela.
ReplyDeleteWow! I like the way you have described the setting Nela. I especially like that you explained using your senses the echo as you entered the hall. That's a really good hook you've used. It makes me want to read more.I can infer the word echo means that the hall must have been empty. The sound of strumming ukes. Now I feel like I've been transported to a tropical island sitting under a palm tree. Again I can infer because you used the word obsessed to describe feelings. What a great word obsessed.It makes me think the young ones are sleep walking towards the sound of the music coming from the ukes. The young ones must have really enjoyed the Tui whanau assembly. I only wish I could read what happens next... keep up the amazing writing Nela.
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